The Life of an Immortal: The Revolution by Night

Part Three: Kaleborl
Frina and Warric relationship:

Frina makes Warric dance with her while the Enchanters are singing. Frina has been concerned about finding out about Warric's condition and wants to do this as a way to get close with her friend again. Warric is hesitant, but can't refuse Frina. As they are dancing, (depending on whose pov it is) certain moves remind them of their childhood together.

Only problem would be to find a way to get them together in Dynnas during the events of the fourth book.

Theran and Hil Storyline:

 * Theran finds it important to go with Hil back to Truphos and see the Nebali Sha. Jona is against this as is the rest of the Immortals who are now only answering to him. So Theran decides to go herself, proving she still knows best.
 * Hil speaks of hidden catacombs her ancestors used to make it through the Ashkel Plains.... They eventually deduce the entrance is just south of Dynnas (The portrait gallery would have been a good place, but the location doesn't logically work).
 * Arguments through the catacombs - Hil doesn't like that Theran depends on her Hutha Shi (she brought all the ingredients along so she has plenty to drink on the journey) and Theran doesn't like that Hil ran away from her people.
 * They encounter a great monster (it used to be a golem, but the Nebali Sha bastardized it into something horrendous to guard the catacombs). It is angry with Hil because it knows what she is.
 * They reach the Shabbals. Hil quarrels with her people and Theran is uncomfortable around the foreign relatives (Theran is dying inside seeing the Shabbals' traditions and customs and how they're different from her's).
 * ... Resolutions?

Things to include:


 * They each help the other overcome their struggles: Hil helps Theran realize she doesn't need the Hutha Shi, and Theran helps Hil realize she can still be proud of who she is.
 * Theran loses her ingredients and goes through withdraw at some point. She hallucinates (while drowning?) the lives of the Immortals before they forgot - remembering their names and remembering Mirifus a la Once Upon a December.
 * They are separated at some point and Hil's gnarled ring gets left behind. Theran picks it up (not knowing what it does, only knowing it belongs to Hil) and puts it on. She feels the pull of the ring and she mistakes it for leading her out of the catacombs or finding what she needs - it all depends on when it happens.
 * Ideas for how they separate: the golem takes Hil (iffy on this one), falls in water and currents take Hil, the Shabbals do something with Hil (Malicious intentions? Lock her up for betraying them? Parents disown her?)
 * Last scene is with Theran dumping the last of her Hutha Shi in the water (could be when she hallucinates?). She now knows what needs to be done in order to save Valsalt - make every Immortal remember.
 * The Shabbals agree to help? What are their terms with Hil by the end? should it be a cliffhanger?
 * Theran tells Hil how she followed the ring to find her. Hil doesn't explain to Theran, but is visibly shocked.
 * We learn Hil's real name.